When the going gets tough, a halfway decent plot intro happens right before the tough get going

Aug 11 2008 11:59 pm

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The MattsterMaster says...

IT'S ABOUT TIME! I finally got the plot to make sense compared to the old introduction. If you still don't think the plot makes sense, here's what the old plot intro was like:
ENYA: *draws a line on the ground* Dido will never know what hit her!
DIDO: *shows up*
ENYA: Let's race somewhere. I'm not sure where. Ready? Go!
DIDO: *jumps out of the comic, possibly giving the false notion that Enya's room in-comic is in a void* Eat my dust! Which is the sand in my shoes.

What was I thinking when I made that?! Anyways, although the main plot is the conflict between Dido and Enya, about half the strips will be random gags (though better than the first few), and the other half will be plot-related, usually by a conflict between a random Dido supporter and a random Enya supporter. I may even do a screenshot-based one every now and then for old-time's sake, albeit in an "I actually kinda know what people seem to want now" way.

And in case you didn't know, panel 6 is a Pixel Comic reference and panel 7 is a SpongeBob reference. Felt like I had to explain that so I wouldn't get comments that say "What do hand motions have to do with their songs?" and "HOW ON EARTH COULD YOU MISTAKE BLUE FOR YELLOW?!".

Also, since it's kinda hard to understand the dialogue order in panel 13, here is what I wanted: Each side's formerly-rejected members' dialogue goes from top to bottom at the same time (i.e. Celine Dion and Jhudora at about the same time, Bowser and Peach at about the same time, etc.), except after Homsar's line, in which case it goes Gir, Zim, Robina Hood, Jennifer.

I'm still open for constructive criticism if you still don't understand something (I'm autistic, so there's bound to be something I forgot to explain).

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